June's "The Chronicle"

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June's "The Chronicle"

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Gentlemen, it gives me enormous pleasure to (at long last) distribute the June edition of The Chronicle. Whilst I wish I could take credit, I'm afraid that must go to my subordinates in the Federation News Service. Given the relatively experimental format (that is, .pdf) we're very eager to hear your comments, thoughts and suggestions on the aesthetics, as well as the content for July's issue.

You may find the Chronicle here.
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Page 3 - Author Name

+ what happened to the Engineering info?
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Digi wrote:Page 3 - Author Name

+ what happened to the Engineering info?
The conversation we had earlier will be in the July issue - the June issue represents, well, what happened in June. Apologies for its delay.
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Looks great! Just a idea though. i think we should post these on the STO forums in our recruitment thread as well.
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D'Jay wrote:Looks great! Just a idea though. i think we should post these on the STO forums in our recruitment thread as well.
I like your thinking. Given the delay on the issue, we'll begin doing just that with the next one.
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Digi wrote:Page 3 - Author Name
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Ok besides that Author Name error it's a good start for a first time. It can only get better. Great work FNS!
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Well done!
That's what i'm talking about! :mrgreen:
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Bravo!
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Re: June's "The Chronicle"

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  • The layout requires considerable updates;
  • The author of the 'STO State of Mind' entry has been left blank;
  • The images need to be of high quality;
  • Try to keep the font the same;
  • Try to write more in-depth articles;
  • Try to make the layout in Adobe InDesign;
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